I... I think you may be one of the most beautiful women I've ever seen. I'm not the sort of person who says that stuff to people (shame is my life, so being honest makes me feel vulnerable), but still. I feel like it would be appropriate.
It seems bad etiquette to go "Boobies!" at this but it has to be said looking back at the first stock entry they seem to have popped up/grown from nowhere.
I do love the raggy tied on pieces for the skirt and the top is pretty good, but I think there seems to be something slightly missing...it could be some sort of focus, the umbrella works well for that in the later shots.
Also, finally, I'm picking up massive 'Kaylee Frye' vibes from this, intentional?